Saint Patricks Day

WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

There was a boy called Patrick he was born somewhere in Britain he went to school after school. His mother called out"Patrick are you doing you're homework." He said "yes mum I'm nearly finish." When he was whittling his slingshot.One day he didn't go to school he just went to the beach suddenly he froze he saw a black ship the the crew swung on the rope one of the crew got Patrick and the other boys and girls they got kidnapped they all sailed to Ireland  the young girls and boys they sold them to a man called Milchu. Patrick was looking sheep and swine (means pigs)he is a shepherd he keeps the fire night and day so the wolves can't eat the sheep. One night he herd a voice was God he said "Patrick you can go back home if you fast and pray." Patrick fast and pray he trusted God one night he said "Patrick go to the ship." Patrick go to his ship it was leaving but a crew throw a out a rope the crew were glad but there was a storm they touched the ground they are in France one of the crew was strarving they were looking for food and one of the crew said "well done christian." Patrick knelt down and "Please, Lord send us some food." Patrick herd some wild pigs went he in the went in the woods and found some red apples so they had pork and apple sauce for dinner ti was time Patrick to go home, so they wave goodbye.