Tuesday 31 May 2016

The Seven Sisters

Once, there were seven sisters in an ancient forest and the streams were playing.
One sunny Sunday, the seven mean sisters were at a village to tell fibs.They walked to their uncle Scot's place. The oldest sister said, "Look, there is an asteroid coming to earth." 
Uncle Scot said, "Where?" 
They all started laughing. All of them  said while they were laughing, "There is no asteroid."
The Tane God of light felt sorry for Scot and said to the seven girls, "If you tell lies in the village, then you will be dragged up to the sky and you will work for Uratengangana of stars."
The girls didn't listen to him.

On Monday morning, they ran to their uncle Dave's place and gave him a cake. He ate it. It wasn't chocolate cake; it was mud. The God of light got so angry, he lifted them into the sky and they turned into stars. 
In early June, there are the seven sisters in the sky and that's how Matariki began.

Monday 23 May 2016

Lost in the Forest

Kimamita and Molly were sisters. They were 1 minute away from the forest and liked to explore in the weekends to see the kingfisher.

One sunny Sunday in summer, they decided to go for a when they made it to the forest they heard tui singing a tune in her nest keeping her eggs warm they heard a stream they walked down to the river they saw a tui they tried to catch it. They could't find it but they got lost it was unfamiliar suddenly they a noisy it said"Kimamita  Molly where are you?" The mum and dad ran to the forest "Kimamita  Molly where are you?" The perants found them they said"let have soup and hot chocolate."

Sunday 22 May 2016

Tom's Snake

WALT make up a story about a Pet Day problem.
WWBSWW:
  • Begin with an orientation to tell the reader who, did what, where and when.
“Pet Day will be on Friday,” Miss Anderson, Tom’s teacher, announced to the class on Monday. “Bring your pet to school and tell us about it, then we will have a pet parade.”
Tom was so excited. He would be able to bring Harry to school to 
show everyone.
  • Write the events leading up to the problem.
At the end of the day, he ran all the way home to get his pet ready for Friday.
He loved Harry and had wanted to show his friends for a long time, but his mum and dad had told him that Harry must never leave the house; but, now, his
teacher had given him permission to bring it to school.
Smilingly, he polished Harry’s green silky skin, talking to it with his friendly voice. “You’re allowed to come to school, Harry. You can meet my friends and my friends can meet you.”
As soon as Friday came around, Harry carefully took Harry out of its cage and placed him into his black backpack. He couldn’t wait to get to school, so he ran
all the way.
When the bell rang, he and the rest of the class stepped into the 
classroom.
  • Write the problem.
Tom opened his backpack to show his friends what he had brought to school for Pet Day.
“It’s a green, slippery, slimey …...................” he said slowly. “Snake!” he 
shouted.
“Tom Denver, give me that thing right now!” Miss Anderson 
commanded.
Tom opened his hand to pass it over, but, at that moment, naughty Billy Burton lunged to grab it himself. He bumped Tom’s shoulder and Tom hurtled forward, the snake flying out of his hand to the back of the classroom.
“Eeeeeee! Where is it?” squealed Miss Anderson.
Chaos threatened in Room 4.  Children jumped up and ran around, screeching
their lungs out and pushing over chairs and desks, trying to find Tom’s snake.

  • Write the events to tell your readers how the problem was solved. 
They were feeling frightened. 
Tom had an idea. He gathered some things from the class -scissors, cord to tie, glue, paper and the teacher's lunch. Tom glued the sheet of paper together. He put the ham sandwich in the middle. 
All the kids leapt on the their desks so the snake couldn't bite their toes off. They kept quiet and still. 
The snake slowly wriggled towards the ham sandwich. As he took a bite, Tom soundlessly approached Harry and picked it up gently to put into his backpack. 
"Never bring  a snake to school again," said Miss Anderson.
Well done, Sabriye.

From Jamling Tenzing

To all the children of St. Paul's primary school, greetings from the Himalayas.
I know you have been following John and our journey to the to roof of the world. I hope you learned something about our mountains and culture.
I invite you all to join me one day to visit our part of the world.

Hi my name is Sabriye we were following you to Mount Everest, we seen new things at Nepal thank you for the photos. I liked the yaks, the markets and the wild flowers. I might go there some day.

Jamling Tenzing Hi Sabriye, I hope you will visit our beautiful country one day soon, there are a lot more to see here.

Mount Everest

The Magic Show

All St Paul's students walked into the hall. There was a man in front of the stage. He said, "Hello, St Paul's. My name is Jonathon. This is Carel."Who is he? 
He started the showWhat show? He got a pump to blow a balloon up and tied it up, but he didn't tie it well and it ........ 
He blew another one up. He tied it. He said to Riley, "What's your name?" 
She answered back, "Riley."

Thursday 12 May 2016

The Birthday of the Church

The Church is people spreading the Good News about Jesus.
Before Pentecost, the followers of Jesus were hiding in their house because they were scared that they might get arrested by the soldiers like Jesus, but they saw fire on each other's heads and heard wind in the air.
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The Holy Spirit had come to them to help them spread the Good News about Jesus.
This day is called Pentecost. It was the birthday of the Church.

Thursday 5 May 2016

Shopping

On Saturday morning, I had a bad cough. It really hurt.
I said to Mum, "Mum, can we go to New World and get some medicine?"
Mum said, "Ok, we can go now."
Mum and I were in the shiny golden van. Mum was driving  to New World. '
When we walked into the entrance, we were looking for the medicine and we needed to find some food for school. We found the medicine and paid for it and the food we drove home.
My mum is the nicest mum of all by taking me to New World and giving me some medicine.